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Can you read my introduction and tell me what do you think?
If there is mistakes can you correct them snd if it's not organized well can you help me to organize? Thanks in advance.
Here is the topic of my essay.
Personal success is important in anyone's life, but the measures of success vary from society to society. In our society success means having money and material possesions.The only way one can feel successful in America is to make a lot of money.
I dissagree with that.
In general success is defined by the person not someone who is judging someone. Success ussualy means making money or having a lot of power and respect. But, some people define success in other ways. everyone needs to be successful in order to feel fulfiled in life. However, each person can definite success in different ways and it does not have to be the standart definition. Each persons life is their own and it's them to choose what makes them happy and content. Even though, success is a state of mind, not a state of financial or material wealth.
You started out well in the beginning and then ran haywire with the spelling, grammar, and idea.
Decide what you want to argue about. Are you wanting to say success is defined by the individual or the society?
Plus your statement "everyone needs to be successful in order to feel fulfiled in life" is not true.
Be careful about the line between "personal success" and success as a perception by outsiders.
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